There is no place in my eyes or my heart for sympathy. The love simply washes everything else away. I'm talented. I can mend wings and catch falls. I can wait. I see the tousled hair, the smeared kajal, the twinkling diamonds. You have never looked more beautiful.
I will always be home to you.
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I can't say that I'm super happy with this one, but it just felt right, so I stopped being ocd and just hit 'publish.' Oh well... what say you (all)?
you know it's strange that i started out writing from a girls point of view.. and then somehow my character became a guy for sure in this post.. cause before this it could have gone either way.. ofcourse, it still can if the guys you know wear kajal.. (shudder)
LOL!!! I know you became a guy for sure with this one but I'm soo glad you did! Cos you were a guy to me from the beginning! (ok that sounded weird!)
I loved it and you're right it feels bang on!
@revealed: Yeah.. I guess I did that cause we mostly see it the other way round, and it's nice to have a new perspective. And, oh, wouldn't it be nice to know this guy? Or be that girl? *sigh*
Yeah, about that! It isn't so nice :P
@revealed: yeah, not anymore it isn't. I was totally dreaming up a nice hindi-movie ending, and you totally pulled a modern-no-song-dance-tragic-end-2hour-hindi-movie move on me!
@wiseling: LOLLL! Burst your bubble, did i? :P
I have to tell you, I had such fun!
(not bursting your bubble, but doing this :D)
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